My original idea has evolved for the better. I decided that my original idea that I explained in my film treatment was anticlimactic. I have now finished the filming and starting editing. These are the changes:
I decided to have Jessie be involved in a car accident, which means my film now has a darker tone, as Katriona, grieving, self-harms. Additionally, the couple have been dating for a while, which is shown by memories of them together.